stopping people from fighting

people are getting in fights and causing commotions every day. and we should stop bringing people from other countrys into our country. they should stay were they came from.

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  • Olivia-Avatar.jpg Olivia @ the BNC
    29 Apr 2019

    Thanks for your post! Remember, posts are best when they are more developed pieces of writing that spark a discussion. It would be great to hear more about your point of view here. Can you give some examples of these commotions, or give some more reasons for your point of view? Evidence and examples make reasons stronger, so give it a go!

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  • New-Horizons-logo-250x250.jpg creative_starfruit | New Horizons Children's Academy
    29 Apr 2019

    Yes I agree and I love the way you have giving you’re point of view is strong and it would be and it would more effective if you add evidence to support you’re answer by saying how does it makes people fight and why we should not let people in our county and what happened if people did stop fighting should we let people in our country then and why

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  • St-Gregorys-logo-250x250.jpg introspective_recipe | St Gregory's Catholic Primary School C
    03 May 2019

    i think this a very strong opinion good job👏👍

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