Weekly Competition #4

Congratulations Streatham Wells Primary School!

This week’s competition was a story about freedom in 50 words.

Well done to Snowleopard06 who told a creative story that captured our attention and made us think about freedom in a really imaginative way. 

We were really impressed with all of the excellent storytelling shown!

You can enter this week’s competition here

 

185 Comments

  1. By the way BNC – that whole post was exactly 50 words long! Olivia

    • Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

      Wow!

      • Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

        Mr PlayStation
        Once an old man sat on a bus because he had to go to town. While he was in town he saw a child with a toy gun.He said to the boy “they are dangerous”then the boys response was “no they are not “The man walked on ahead.

      • Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

        Just remember your hub name
        Little miss pebbles

    • A brown-haired girl called Mickey lived somewhere where everyone had to look the same and do the same and be the same. She was bored. One day, Freedom arrived and told everyone they could be different if they wanted. Mickey knew what to do. She dyed her hair bright pink.

    • Thomas Middlecott Academy Thomas Middlecott Academy

      How can you tell if you have used 50 words? And also can we use under that, say like 49?
      – Clover Moon

      • Hi Clovermoon. If you copy and paste your entry into Microsoft Word it’ll tell you how many words you have used (but I usually just count them up on the screen, although that isn’t very efficient!)
        You can definitely use fewer than 50 words, that would be great! I look forward to reading your entry. Olivia.

      • Thomas Middlecott Academy Thomas Middlecott Academy

        In the quiet little town of perfect, everybody dressed and the same. One girl called Jesse didn’t like living there and rebelled. She believed kids should have freedom and enjoy themselves whilst they can.
        – Clover Moon
        34 words

    • In a town called Ratena, there was a girl. She was a slave to this cruel crooked owner. She had longed to be free, to live in her own home away from the owner. Life was a tragedy. One day she just walked out and stopped all slavery throughout planets. Sparnosaur12

    • Thomas Middlecott Academy Thomas Middlecott Academy

      I awoke to a normal day. At least i thought. I pulled on my shoes and headed out the door. I walked into the forest where people were always killed. All gates were removed when we got our freedom. I turn the corner to see a man with a gun.

      -Devil490

    • Thomas Middlecott Academy Thomas Middlecott Academy

      i think freedom is where you are allowed to make your own decisions and choices without being told off by anyone. Everybody should be allowed to do and say whatever they like as long as it isn’t rude. Everyone should be accepted no matter what.

      – Turquoise Bubbles

    • Thomas Middlecott Academy Thomas Middlecott Academy

      Everyone yearns for freedom. I have freedom. But with freedom, I don’t have as much safety. So as I walk to school, I have to be extremely careful and make sure that I’ll be ok. I love having freedom, I can fly like a bird and do what I want.

      ~Babs523

    • Thomas Middlecott Academy Thomas Middlecott Academy

      My life begins as an independent individual,in freedom.The freedom is to chose what you do in future,what subjects you want to do after year 9,the choice you make when choosing your school.My life begins in a hospital,my first sight of freedom is my first breath…
      Coolnerd123

    • Boutcher Primary School Boutcher Primary School

      Onicyclops
      Once, there was a place where everyone had to be the same. Then a man came. He was different. He inspired many others. Once, there was a place full of freedom. From then on, everyone was different.

    • Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

      There was a girl.
      She looked up,she looked down .
      Everyone looked the same.
      She felt like she was dreaming.
      “Woah I wasn’t dreaming”
      She needed to change.
      So she brought pink hair die,
      Then brought a blue shiny dress
      She went out and shouted.
      Little miss singer
      “I do declare epic freedom.

    • Thomas Middlecott Academy Thomas Middlecott Academy

      Freedom. Such a simple word but it has such a strong meaning to it. Living by your own rules without anyone to stop and tell you what to do. Sounds great, doesn’t it? Freedom is what everyone wants to have. Everyone wants to have the chance to free their minds.

      -Enchantress

  2. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    Once upon a time, there was a young girl who had all the freedom she wanted! Her name was Rosaline. One day she decided to walk home on her own but SHE MUST BE CAREFUL! So she did… and she loved it! In the end she now does it everyday!

    unicornburger

  3. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    i think that every one should have freedom and safety because if can you have freedom than you speek up for your self and others also you should all have safety because if you do not have saty than if you get hert you have know one to help say you pass out know one can check you if your hert so you could die and that is not good because all of your family will be all up set so all you queens and priministers I think you should look up and give every one freedom and safety thank you goalie

    • Hi Goalie, I think this is a really good point but it’s not a competition entry for this week. Read the instructions above and we’d love to hear a 50 word story about being free! Olivia

  4. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    There once was a young girl called Catherine. She was from Ireland and wanted more. She moved from her beloved home to England! She was going to train to be a nurse. She met a man called Anthony and they got married, had two children and lived happily together forever!

    slothocorn.

    the reason i did this story was because if Catherine didn’t have freedom she wouldn’t have had her children or met her love

  5. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    Once on a dreary day in Russia , there was a man who lived directly in the middle of a solemn forest. He was given a decision one day; that decision was whether to choose freedom or safety. Obviously, he choose freedom and from that day on he wasn’t restrained!
    By teal wolf.

  6. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    freedom is the same as safety because if you are safe somebody could put you in a padded room with air and food and drink and they pump air in but the window is locked you are safe but not got freedom and thatn is why you need freedom .Bye!

    by ogaremogi27

  7. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    freedom. just a word. what is it ? just discovered it. i`m Kit. i was a slave . but now i`m FREE . life was horrible. get this get that , fetch me some coffee ,give the dog some food. Don`t even wanna think about that. but now i`m free. forever and ever!
    by hungrywolf

  8. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    There was a woman called Milly (she was a Muslim) . She lived in Russia . She got half her freedom that she should have. Everyone got there rights because they were from another faith . Millie went to the president how freedom could be the same for everyone everywhere!

    pandaboy

  9. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    ONCE THERE WAS A MAN CALLED BILLY. HE WAS IN A COUNTRY WHICH DOESN’T GIVE RIGHTS.
    HE THOUGHT IT WAS WRONG NOT TO HAVE RIGHTS. HE FOUGHT AGAINST THE PRIME MINISER.
    EVENTUALLY,THE PRIME MINISTER CAVED IN AND GAVE HIM AND THE PEOPLE OF HIS COUNTRY ALL THE RIGHTS ,INCLUDING FREEDOM.

    SHRECKBOX1804

  10. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    One morning, there was a boy called bob and he had all the freedom he wanted he could speak for himself but he wasn’t safe at all but he didn’t care because he had freedom so he thought he could do anything so one day he said I’m going to walk home so he did and he was alright
    Pizzadancer22

  11. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    Once there was a girl called Jess. She had brown, curly hair and dazzling blue eyes. She had always been bullied and was always getting told what to do. Every day she wished for freedom and one lucky day someone granted her wish! She had never, ever this good!
    By blueunicorn

  12. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    Once there was a man called Joe. He didn’t get any voice to say what he thought. He lived in misery for years and then he decided to do something, something that will change his life of Misery .He went on a protest for FREEDOM and HE WON and succeeded.
    Smileyface

  13. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    greencat if you are safe then it could be boring . would you like to be bored

  14. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    In the richest land of Knighton,there lived Lance the most popular celebrity in town. But,he also wanted to do things on his own. So his parents agreed but didn’t expect to be sent to Knights Academy!!! But finally,he got used to it.

  15. An old, grumpy man had lots to say- it was often mean and spiteful. He snapped at a child: “Shove off, stupid”. The child, a BNC student, said: “Freedom to say anything comes with responsibility to care for feelings”. The old man decided the BNC student was very wise indeed.

  16. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    Puppet
    No one gave love, no one cared. His master made plays with him. He danced with sadness. As his owner got madder he became sadder. He wasn’t at his expectation. Until someone told him, “You can be free as long as you like yourself.”
    Fight for your rights!
    AgentKitty

  17. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    How do you use FREEDOM?
    some people use it for fun, some people use it for nonsense, some people even use it to murder and bully!
    Why do people need or even want FREEDOM?
    people need it because sometimes you need to be left alone and free. people want freedom because its fun and sometimes new and adventurous!

    FootballAlien11

  18. Allhallows Primary Academy Allhallows Primary Academy

    Gina was from a faraway country. It was safe. Police were everywhere. Gina’s family followed the same religion as everyone. They had to. Gina wanted to believe differently. She was thrown into prison labeled dangerous. She escaped to England where she could be free and believe what she wanted to.
    Catmad
    50 words

  19. Rockliffe Manor Primary Rockliffe Manor Primary

    once upon a time there was a lady called stella she was a mean old lady who hates her job as a teacher because she dislikes children one of her students said : we all should have freedom it’s not fair that you hate us because we didnt do anything wrong

    by : colacubez

  20. Rockliffe Manor Primary Rockliffe Manor Primary

    once there was a group of girls . They were controlled by an evil man who made them do bad things
    that got them into danger.One day one of the girls spoke up “we need to do something”she said.
    She wrote a big petion to save this group of.They one the fight and was free and knew everyone desers the right of FREDOM.

    By Unigirl G

  21. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    There was a little girl who was 12. She woke up in Russia feeling tired and drowsy. Some of the Russian government came to her house and gave her the opportunity to choose whether to live with safety or to live with freedom. She couldn’t decide. She loved her family and friends here in Russia but every day she was too tired to work So she chose Freedom and after that she lived happily ever after.

    I know it’s quite a bit more than 50.

    by TheTeleportaitionKing

  22. Colegrave Primary School Colegrave Primary School

    Once upon a time there was a man called George who was a slave for half of his life then a lady called Mary-Anne came and helped all slaves escape . They all got their freedom ! When they got home they were so happy to see their families and lived freely.
    Ladypufflekins543

  23. John Ruskin Primary School John Ruskin Primary School

    ___FREEDOM ___
    There was a girl named Rosie. She always thought when would she, have the chance for freedom. So one day, she asked her Mum a question. “What would you love to do if there was freedom?” The Mum said she didn’t know! However, she was happy with all her family.

    Story written and Comment by:Lovebunnycharm

  24. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    I think all human being are born free and equal and treat people how they would like to be treated.
    Little Miss Cook

  25. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    MR BUll
    MR playstation that is a very good comment

  26. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    I once had a friend lived just down the road. He was my best, a great guy to have around ,but when he was 13 he moved to Russia. He texted me every day saying it was to safe but he had no freedom to do anything- he couldn’t even go to the park without police every where he said no freedom no nothing just here texting. He said he had no life to live !!!!
    by Epic the football king

  27. Faringdon Community College Faringdon Community College

    Imagine a world where we have no way to listen to our ideas, no way to get our voice heard. Imagine a place where we can’t vote for our future, having it decided for us. Imagine a world where we are ignored. That is life through a child’s eye.
    – GryffindorPug

  28. Faringdon Community College Faringdon Community College

    One day there was a girl.She was born in Russia.The country where rights are abused and freedom taken away, rights forbidden.She protested in the streets but ended up being prosecuted instead.Is this life fair more like trapped in a jail cell I prefer that life more….

    -GoldenPanda

  29. Faringdon Community College Faringdon Community College

    Cold and alone, she sits on the muddy floor as her mum comes to console her. Her mum speaks gently “it’s ok love we’re safe,” Silence……………………… “But we’re not free,” the daughter cries, looking at the tall fences that tower around her. “A refugee camp, it’s more like a prison.”

    Blueleopard

  30. Faringdon Community College Faringdon Community College

    Свобода means freedom in Russian, but what does it mean? Andrei looked it up on his birthday and found: “the power or right to act, speak, or think as one wants.” The next day Andrei felt free because he could think what he wanted to and knew what freedom meant.
    Rosecat 

  31. Faringdon Community College Faringdon Community College

    Freedom. It’s like water.
    Water cannot flow if compressed in a jar.
    If you smash the glass, a small tidal wave swallows the world around it.
    Flecks of bursting sunlight radiating from the transparent glowing liquid, swirling and glimmering.
    A jar is a prison. Bars of glass.
    Can water sliver through?

    -aesthetichouseplant

  32. Once in a land of stifling grey, some children decided they needed freedom to share their ideas, and, in a burst of colour, they spoke out on a platform called the burnet news club. They soon discovered others shared their passion for truth and spread their rainbow of free expression. NellieBly:the2nd

  33. There once was a girl called Sam and she was restricted from going out. Finally when she couldn’t hold back her feelings anymore she told her parents she wanted freedom. The right to go out and enjoy the fresh air, make friends and feel the wind blowing through her hair.

    -JoJoSays

  34. John Ruskin Primary School John Ruskin Primary School

    A girl named Giselle worked for an evil but wealthy man called Will. She would always dream of freedom, sometimes aloud, which was when she got spanked. One day, he went out ,leaving the key in the lock for Giselle and she got freedom,but Will became a slave.

    By CupcakesandRainbows

  35. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    All thanks to the Russian people we would not have rights! LR [we’ve taken out your name here. Please remember not to write your name on the Hub!]

  36. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    All thanks to the UN, people have rights and freedom. If we did not have freedom we would be separated! Mr fight

  37. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    In 1974 there was no freedom in their times. It was dark,scary, and gloomy. There was no freedom for the people’s rights around the world. After 1987 the people weren’t working or eating because they had no money to buy them their own food and clothes

  38. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Once there was a little girl and her family,she was bored,the girl wanted to be free all she wanted was Freedom. The girl (Ellie) kept on going she tried and tried to be free.Ellie just wanted freedom.”Freedom” she sighed.For Ellie freedom was happiness and joy.
    Little Miss Pebbles

  39. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    By little miss Dj

  40. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Everyone should have rights I repeat everyone

  41. Allhallows Primary Academy Allhallows Primary Academy

    There was once two twins named jack and ruby, that felt they were being controlled all there life. Ever since they were three they were told what to do. All they prayed for was to get a little bit of freedom but that unfortunately didn’t happen. One day, when they were ten they ran away and never came back.
    by patheticblabby218910

  42. Allhallows Primary Academy Allhallows Primary Academy

    there was ones 2 twins called tom and fill and they when on a job and they was firer firefighters and they was called to a firer but they never came bake to come to the chef and the chef and they was dead but it was odd
    by mr sloth433

  43. Hi it is Woodhill Walrus, Woodhill Flower, Flame Ninja, Fire Cracken.

    One day there was a little girl and boy who were twins. The boy was allowed to do whatever he wanted. However, the girl had to do everything the boy told her too. She was very sad. Suddenly the boy felt sorry for her and made life fair.

  44. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    I will definitely write a story as soon as I can! – snowleopard06

  45. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    Today, Ellie decided to make a recipe for freedom. Her ingredients were,
    A sprinkle of greatness.
    A pinch of determination.
    ½ cup of happiness.
    ½ cup of faith.
    1 cup of liberty.
    When she was done, Ellie arranged a stall outside and sold her recipe to passers by.
    -48 words
    snowleopard06

  46. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    I was running free, the wind blowing in my hair. With nothing to worry about. No guns, no war, and no sounds of the droning planes overhead. There might not be fresh grass under my feet like there used to be, but…I will run. No one can stop me now.

    StarryLilacUnicorn

  47. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    my story was exactly 50 words!
    StarryLilacUnicorn

  48. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Once there was a little girl who lived with her parents, she was the only child in her family. The girl was bored and lonely because she had NO freedom. It was between 1950 and 2000.She had NO friends. If she had freedom she would be full of joy.
    Little Miss Cook

  49. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Good story snow leopard 06

  50. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    One ordinary day ,my parents had grounded me. I was locked away in my room. I peered out of my window. I could see my best friends playing outside in the glorious sunshine. They were considering whether to knock for me. Then they suddenly ungrounded me. ” I just want my FREEDOM!”
    By Littlemisskittencorn

  51. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Once there was a little boy who had no rights or freedom because of his family he couldn’t go anywhere without his family members he never was alone but he had freedom one day.

  52. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Well done little miss cook
    How did you do that story
    This is great but have you tried to edit it
    Little Miss Pebbles

  53. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Freedom lets you be free and you can do enything you wish to do no mater what, also freedom can be dangerous and make weld war three.Also the power or right to act,speak or think as one wants.And some people do not belive.
    Mr Prov it

  54. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Mr fight how are you doing today

    By little miss Dj

  55. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Once in America 1960-1970 black people had hardly any rights.There where buses for black people and white people.It got worse as the years on. It was really hard and unfair.It was hard for them.They needed freedom.Martin Luther King saved them
    Little miss vinegar candle kitten

  56. Chiltern Way Academy Chiltern Way Academy

    In a world where children had the freedom to do what they wanted I would go to the beach and play in the sea and go to rush and have party and be mad and crazy t.s

  57. Chiltern Way Academy Chiltern Way Academy

    i think that i should not have to go to school . And should do school twice a week .And do school work on computer . And all the other day we should go out and play education game for the other day. This is my idea of freedom. LH

  58. Chiltern Way Academy Chiltern Way Academy

    I think freedom means you shouldn’t do any school work, and instead do anything you want. For example, instead of school you could go to party’, trampoline parks, beach on your xbox one or xbox 360 play station 4 or three and school should be a option any time you want. This is freedom!
    LP

  59. Chiltern Way Academy Chiltern Way Academy

    in the land of freedom kids didn’t have to go to school they went to trampoline park and eat sweets all day but i will get
    bored after about 2 weeks so i will start my own school and it will still be a bit fun but still do work and have a piazza.

    LF

  60. Chiltern Way Academy Chiltern Way Academy

    In the land of freedom all the boys could do anything they wanted and ate sweets for breakfast lunch and dinner also there were no grownups or girls to bother the boys and LORD ever again.
    F.S

  61. Once there was an evil villain who went by the name of rule. Rule made sure that everyone followed his policies and made everyone miserable. One day a burst of colours came streaming into the city and queen freedom appeared. She showed everyone how to be happy… by freedom.

    RiverSmith06

  62. Fatima rode her bike around the gate post. She laughed as her friend Oscar came puffing up the path. She heard a voice scream, “What are you doing girl! It is improper for girls to cycle!”. Fatima turned and calmly replied, “It’s my choice and I’m very good at it!”.
    By NellieBly:the2nd

  63. Poppy (a normal 11 year old girl) was sitting in a Science lesson dreaming about Space. The country she lived in had a rule about freedom where you could not leave the country but suddenly the freedom alien appeared. Poppy became an alien and went to live on space.

  64. There was once a girl with name of Penni Rivers. She lived in a place where nobody had freedom or rights. The people that ruled it were called Fiona, Ruby, Elena, Eddy, Dobby, Olive and Manny. But what Penni realised was that even in the darkest days Freedom is there.

    Riverlightsparkle

  65. Holly, newly born, was taught to never ever dare leave the cave; she didn’t enjoy the eternal gloom. So instantly, she decided to leave. Holly ventured into the light; outside the cave. Sunlight caressed her face, filling her with joy and warmth. Holly was free, at last…
    IT FELT INCREDIBLE!!!

    By Pip:Wip

  66. There lived the old woman who swallowed a fly. She was an animal bounty hunter. Instead of caging the animals she would swallow them. They were depressed and pleaded for regurgitation. Crash! In came Freedom and told her to change her ways. They were freed. She became a BNC member.
    Sparnosaur12

  67. My friend loved boxing, she’d talk about it all day I guess that was all she wanted do. The day before she left she said she needed to try it. I thought at least she’d be alone. Maybe she wasn’t though. I haven’t seen her for days now.

    Cheesepuff 14

  68. Olivia dreamed of becoming an astronaut. She believed that in space, you had so much freedom, unlike in her country, were she wasn’t allowed. Up in space a meteor, filled with the right to freedom, fell towards her country. Ever since that meteor landed, fairness has reigned among them.

    -BlueCheese05

  69. Hilda is an awfully bored battery hen, living in terribly cramped conditions with hundreds of other hens. Apart from laying eggs and eating grain mixed with chemicals there is nothing to do. One day the farmer arrives with the key to set her free,”to the supermarket with you”.

    Bubblecat15

  70. In the big forest fairies lived happily with freedom and did what ever they wanted, until a witch came and was to rule the forest were the fairies lived and were banned from flying and wearing dresses. Then one day the fairies told the witch what they wanted but she sent them to fairy prison. by unicorn 2017

  71. Ana was a duck. She wanted to find out about humans so she watched TV and learned something quite surprising: humans have so many different rules. Without rules, they just got bored not breaking them. With rules, they tried passionately to break them. What strange creatures these humans were.

    Moonlight Sonata

  72. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    There was once a pretty girl named Jaya. Jaya lived where she was protected from all harm however she had no entertainment. She was stuck in her home where she could never leave the house. She had never been taught anything. Then she left and could do whatever she wanted.
    By loyalwolf

  73. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Briar Hill Primary School Briar Hill Primary School
    11 October 2017 at 10.42 am · Reply
    Freedom is one of the many things that you need in your life. If we didn’t have freedom nobody would be away from anybody. We wouldn’t be out and about you would hardly see the bright days. Also sometimes we just need freedom it’s a very big part in life.

    Little miss naenae

  74. Hi BNC! Winners will be announced tomorrow afternoon, so get your final entries in today! Olivia

  75. John Ruskin Primary School John Ruskin Primary School

    Some Freedom In Life

    Emma and Ella are twins. They loved to bake but, they never in their life (so far) had the chance to. They always thought when they would.
    They said, ” We’ve been having safety are whole life. Why don’t we try FREEDOM! ”
    So then they both decided to have some freedom.

    Story written and comment by: Lovebunnycharm

  76. Boutcher Primary School Boutcher Primary School

    There was once a place where everyone had freedom too much freedom actually. It made the place extremely unsafe witch made it a really hard place to live. That’s why you shouldn’t have too much freedom.
    Yamwertolo

  77. Ravenscroft Primary School Ravenscroft Primary School

    Once upon a time 5 girls had a sleepover Darcy , Lucy ,Lilly, Callie and Diana .They played truth or dare for several hours. Until Lilly dared Diana to play Bloody Mary . So Diana went upstairs to play it. As soon as she said Bloody Mary everything was silent…

    DiscoRaven611

  78. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    hers my 50 word story :p

    There was once a cheeseburger. He lived in cheeseburger town. he always had to have cheese in between him. One day he woke up and saw a fairy beside him. “hello “she said. “you know, you can be whatever you want!” he was shocked. he decided to be a hot-dog.

    like it?
    ApplesAndPears10

  79. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    One day there was a cat called snowy her owner always played with her until one day snowy was in a severe accident.Then she was in a cage for 10 weeks and her owners parents let her out and said you can be free.
    purplebook3

  80. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    There was a sad man and he was always sad because he wasn’t allowed to say anything he wanted. Nobody let him have his own opinion. But one day, a man asked him, “What is your favourite ice-cream?” He had finally been given permission to say his opinion.

    unicornicecream106 and comedy11

  81. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    there was a bird who had no wings all the other birds did. He felt like he wasn’t free. He really wanted to fly until one day his mum told him he didn’t need to be like the other birds to fly. He could be free and be different.

    narwhal11 and splasher8

  82. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    ONE DAY, THERE WAS A GIRL CALLED JESS AND SHE WANTED TO BE ABLE TO BE FRIENDS WITH A BOY BUT SHE DIDN’T HAVE THE FREEDOM TO. SO SHE WROTE A 5000 WORD SPEECH. AFTER SHE WENT TO EVERYONE SHE KNEW SHE WAS FINALLY ALLOWED TO BE FRIENDS WITH HIM.
    GOSSIP GIRL AND SLEEPY7

  83. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    once there was a cat who really liked pasta but the cat was never aloud to have any she was so sad.And was delighted when her owner brought a bowl of pasta The cat ate the pasta and jumped out the window to be free and died that is Russia.
    AgentPurplePasta and Cookiecat

  84. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    Once upon a time a little girl believed that she could bring peace and freedom to Russia.When she was a teenager she desided to tell the people that we should stand up.Nobody believed her. She kept telling everyone for years and years.When she died everybody believed her and stand up.Then they managed to make freedom!
    DaisyDare150
    Paw9

  85. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    I love your story Applesandpears10.doubledare

    applesandpears is the best.doubledare

  86. Elaine Primary Academy Elaine Primary Academy

    There was once a 11 year old girl called Sapphire, she lived in a quaint village that was ruled by a evil ruler who punished anyone who tried to be different. Sapphire thought that this was wrong and stood up for her fellow citizens. She was a hero.

    LoopyLama

  87. Newbury Park Primary School Newbury Park Primary School

    Once there was a girl who was not allowed to do certain things that boys could do , like go to school , just because she was a girl. She did not have any parents so she lived in poverty. Determined for freedom she cut her hair and walked into the world pretending to be a boy. She as a girl had many skills as the girl that nobody else coluld do and also worked for girls rights. Exposing to everyone who she was ,and how hard she had worked, rights to Females (in that area)were given. In return for the people’s kindness she built a school were anyone of age or gender could learn.

    KwaiiMonster

  88. Elaine Primary Academy Elaine Primary Academy

    Far far away there was this girl called Cruise and she always got into trouble because of her name (18)she was really sad and wanted freedom. Even though she would hate to leave our home town (33) she ran away. She met some new people who made her feel at home lived happily. -END-
    50 words exactly.

    #Priceless Bunnie

  89. Elaine Primary Academy Elaine Primary Academy

    One day Carly was really wanted to act in a play but she could not only boys could she then really followed her dreams and made a massive speech-taking a risk-and after a few days the rules changed and girls where allowed girls to act.
    47 words

    #Priceless Bunnie

  90. Elaine Primary Academy Elaine Primary Academy

    Olivia are puntution count as a word

  91. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    ONCE THERE WAS A MAN CALLED BILLY. HE WAS IN A COUNTRY WHICH DOESN’T GIVE RIGHTS.
    HE THOUGHT IT WAS WRONG NOT TO HAVE RIGHTS. HE FOUGHT AGAINST THE PRIME MINISER.
    EVENTUALLY,THE PRIME MINISTER CAVED IN AND GAVE HIM AND THE PEOPLE OF HIS FAMILY ALL THE RIGHTS ,INCLUDING FREEDOM.

    SHRECKBOX1804

  92. St Gregory's Catholic Primary School St Gregory's Catholic Primary School

    Once there was a man called Joe. He didn’t get any voice to say what he thought. He lived in misery for years and then he decided to do something, something that will change his life of Misery .He went on a protest for FREEDOM and HE WON and succeeded.
    Smileyface

  93. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    This is a great competition

    Mr viniger

  94. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    how do you know this story

    By little miss Dj

  95. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Good idea Mr Male.

  96. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    There was a family
    They all had to eat the same thing and do the same thing
    One day there was a new law that everybody could have freedom
    Then everybody went out and got different things planed new things and ate different things
    Then everybody was happy and different. Little miss naenae

  97. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Mr striker goal :people should have freedom in the world because you should not be rude to people because they will be rude to you and never hurt people.

  98. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Mr PlayStation
    Once there was a boy he had know idea what he didn’t have in life.
    One day he got accused for doing something that he didn’t have a
    Clue about. A man had made a statement to the police. The boy had
    No rights. He lost the court case sadly.

  99. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    We shouldn’t intervene against Russia because they have bombs and weapons and its the largest country and they have 13 percent of our gas. Mr Johnson

  100. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Wow good story

    Little miss naenae

  101. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Little miss dance : freedom should be aloud in all country’s because it’s not right for people to get hurt or punished or arrested

  102. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    What if there was no freedom there will be no people that will be happy think if the world just has nothing poeple will always be sad and probably be bullied and no one wants this so that’s why we have freedom

    50 word story. Little Miss Sleepy

  103. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Good 50 word story littlemiss:gamer

    Littlemiss:huskycake

  104. Briar Hill Primary School  Briar Hill Primary School 

    Can’t wait till week 5

  105. Streatham Wells Primary School Streatham Wells Primary School

    thank you. Thank You. Thank You! THANK YOU!!! One of our teachers today told me earlier today and I was sooo excited! I am going to check out the next competition now! -snowleopard06

  106. Boutcher Primary School Boutcher Primary School

    I like all of your stories

    dododj

  107. All the stories were great and really inspiring!! Well done Streatham Wells.
    FREEDOM!!!
    Bubblecat15

  108. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    Wow that is an amazing story, it is so original and it really fits in with the issue.

    Bubblequeen

  109. St Peter's Primary School St Peter's Primary School

    Well done snowyleopard!

    AgentKitty

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